Wednesday, December 20, 2006

brishti

shekhane bhishon khara darun garamey shobar oshthagato pran//shudhu erpor dhara snan brishti jeno ashey//shukno pashutey patagulo ritusnan sheshe //spondon enechhey shei pathorer bukey//guti guti shikorera namey sondagandhi mathir jathorey..........shree

2 comments:

Sadiq M. Alam said...

lovely!

why don't u give enter after each line to separate the lines. i think thats more soothing for the readers eye.

shree said...

dats m style