Friday, April 6, 2007

You gave me time [Thanking my Beloved]

You gave me time,when no one gave me time of day,
You looked deep inside,when the world looked away.
You smiled at me ,when there were frowns everywhere,
You gave me love ,when nobody gave me a prayer.


That's why I call you my Beloved ,that's why I call you my Friend,
You touched my heart ,you touched my soul,
and helped me start all over again.
Thats why I call You my Saviour,thats why I call You my Lord,
You gave me love, when nobody gave me a prayer.


You gave me laughter,after I'd cried all my tears,
You heard my dreams,while the rest of the world closed it's ears,
I looked in Your eyes and found the tenderness there,
You gave me love ,when nobody gave me a prayer.

3 comments:

Aruni RC said...

"...gave me love, when nobody gave me a prayer..."

I liked it the best. The rhyme scheme is rather classical, and a sense of sincerity is evident.

arup67 said...

Bah !! Beautiful !

"...I looked in Your eyes and found the tenderness there,
You gave me love ,when nobody gave me a prayer."

It has come out from the core of your heart,thats why it is so beautiful.

Once again, Lovely poem. Kudos.

Sadiq M. Alam said...

how come i didn't read it before. its one of the best for surely.

i liked the whole of it very much!

blessings