Wednesday, April 30, 2008

who will love you eternally

oh brokenhearted,
don't be afraid to fall in love ......
conquer your fears,
there is an open sky ,
waiting for you to fly again.


fall in love dearest.....
it is the most wonderful feeling
that you can experience....
whether it is right love at the wrong time
for the right person,or the wrong love
at the right time for the wrong person.

how can you say it is a waste ......
coz you were your most happiest self.
let others get close to you
and learn to trust again.


let your beloved come to you ,
when the crescent moon hides behind the cloud ...
with a little naughty smile....
it is then you will need your love again ,
who will love you eternally.

so fall in love again dearest .....
and don't be afraid again......



shree

7 comments:

shormi said...

nice poem . i always afraid to fall in love . but ur poem is nice & give me a lot of confidence to fall in love with someone ...

atanu said...

Sorry, just coudn't understand the theme.One can love only one person in a life, I believe.You may have relationships, but love , I believe,comes only once in one's life.

Anonymous said...

let your beloved come to you ,
when the crescent moon hides behind the cloud ...
with a little naughty smile....
it is then you will need your love again ,
who will love you eternally.

loved this part!

- indraneel

Dipti said...

beautiful dear sister

Rabu said...

Love is the word which most describe with pain, pain for separation, pain of longing. every single moments is painful.


Love can give something , but can take everything. Sorry to say.


But pain the most powerful experience as I feel now. It teaches a lot.

beautiful.......

shree said...

thanks all of you ,each one has different vision of love and this poem has stirred various emotions too.love ,fight ,misunderstand and come back to love again.live joyfully and passionately coz that is life ...
love you all.

The Rebel said...

How can you say it is a waste ...... coz you were your most happiest self. let others get close to you and learn to trust again.

Haunting words Indeed...
Love this one...